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So I got hit by a story bug.
dammit.
I try to kill these things, usually.
But there it is. A story bug.


(eshla, if you read this, it's funny you had that post on bee's...)



I'd really like Con-crit.
I have more premise I can post if anyone wants to see it... but I want to know how hard/easy is this to understand. I'm shooting to not have to spend, you know, all my time expounding on thinds, you know? Everyone in this world more or less knows the Score. Walah's from South (FAR south) so Tarmo can explain SOME culture to him but, the techs all the pretty the same.
Making up slang was fun.

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